Adult scifi
Yes! Allow verbs to verb verbily! (I literally laughed out loud!) Great explanation and edit :).
"...allowing the verb to verb verbily." :)
Although I don't always agree with your edits, I do love the way you conceptualise them!
I think in this case, changing the verb from splintering to shattering fits better with the rest of the action in the original line.
Yes! Allow verbs to verb verbily! (I literally laughed out loud!) Great explanation and edit :).
"...allowing the verb to verb verbily." :)
Although I don't always agree with your edits, I do love the way you conceptualise them!
I think in this case, changing the verb from splintering to shattering fits better with the rest of the action in the original line.